Describing a character.

 We have been learning how to create a brainstorm of ideas to describe someone, and then use the brainstorm to write a descriptive paragraph. I worked with the teacher and some other kids and we shared our ideas.

skittles

hi my name is Reed and this week we were in our writing groups. and we had to write about skittles. hope you  like it.


 kia ora  toku ingoa ko rea a tenei wiki matou  ko  i roto i totaou tuhituhi ropo. A matou tuhinga o mua  tuhia epa ana ki tumanako hoe rite te re ira.

I could hear the skittles in the bag  like a rattling rattle snake. Mia came and put some skittles in the plate. Then Moses made them in order there were green brown and  orange and yellow. Then Miss B put them in we watch them go in our plate like a colorful waterfall. Then Tyler came to  put the water from the tap.Then she put the water in with the skittles. Then the color of the skittles started to melt of them. After that they were a rainbow in the plate. Then we could see liter sssssss floating in the water like abandoned ship. Then when Enzo shake it was like a rotten pumpkin. It was like there flesh of dead bodies.the color of the Skittles started to melt of them. After that they were a rainbow in the plate. Then we could see liter s floating in the water like abandoned ship. Then when Enzo shake it was like a rotten pumpkin. It was like there flesh of dead bodies.