Writing with hooks

This week we were in groups and we had to write sentences about pictures and I chose this one. The whole point was to use hooks.




”Pass the ball quick! Quick!” The Red Stags ran like charging bulls. They passed the ball like they were playing hot potato. The crowd cheered like roaring tigers. The crowd felt relieved that he scored a try.

Rugby

this week we were doing recount writing.

Rugby                                                                                      Saturday morning I jumped out of my bed and got dressed to go to my rugby game.

It was Ohaeawai vs Moerewa. We had a half hour warm up. I got to Ohaeawai at 9:50am. Bang! They kicked the ball and Mosese got the ball and ran like a charging bull, but then he got tackled. So me and Carlos were bowling the other team over like bombs and Mosese got up and he got the ball and scored. Then the coach said halftime. Finally, Mosese kicked the ball at the beginning of the second half but then a bad thing happened! Mosese jumped up to the sky like a bird, caught the ball, got tackled in the air and landed on a player.

By the end of the rugby game the score was 7-5. We had 5. It was time to have a feed when it was Player of the Day time.

by Reed.