”Pass the ball quick! Quick!” The Red Stags ran like charging bulls. They passed the ball like they were playing hot potato. The crowd cheered like roaring tigers. The crowd felt relieved that he scored a try.
Friday, May 26, 2017
Writing with hooks
This week we were in groups and we had to write sentences about pictures and I chose this one. The whole point was to use hooks.
”Pass the ball quick! Quick!” The Red Stags ran like charging bulls. They passed the ball like they were playing hot potato. The crowd cheered like roaring tigers. The crowd felt relieved that he scored a try.
”Pass the ball quick! Quick!” The Red Stags ran like charging bulls. They passed the ball like they were playing hot potato. The crowd cheered like roaring tigers. The crowd felt relieved that he scored a try.
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