narrative writing

The Big T-Rex

One day there was a big village in a noisy deadly jungle. There was a big angry blue and brown dinosaur that lived in the jungle.

One day two men were paddling down the river to check their traps for meat. The dinosaur smelt the meat and found the traps. The men came along. The dinosaur heard the men coming and he hid in the bushes and waited. When the men got to the traps they found their meat had gone. The felt something drip onto their heads. They looked up to see what it was and they saw a dinosaur with his mouth wide open.   

The men screamed and screamed and sprinted to their canoe. They paddled as fast as they could. The dinosaur chased after them. The men shot 5 bows at the dinosaur.  2 bows got shot into the dinosaurs neck. The dinosaur roared and tried to get them out. The dinosaur was really hurt and turned back into the jungle.

The two men paddled home as fast as they could and told the other men what had happened but no one believed them.