Kia ora this week we had to do writing test. We had 40 minutes to get it done. We had to do writing about rubbish. Here is my work - my results will be added next week!
Name:REED
Explanation Writing - Term 4
Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.
Think about:
What your reader needs to know about the topic
How you are going to introduce the topic
The order of your ideas and how you link them
What to include in your summary
Remember to:
Choose your words carefully
Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work
Start Writing Here:
Environmental problems
Rubbish is really bad for the plant it kills animals pollute the water and kills sea animals. If you look on the news you will see turtles eating rubbish here are my three reason.
Fistly: relating to the natural world and the impact of human activity on its condition.aiming or designed to promote the protection of the natural world.relating to or arising from a person's surroundings.
2: We should be picking up rubbish and putting in the bin not just leaving it to float around and killing animals that are eating the rubbish.if we leave rubbish around animals will eat it and then the animals will die and some might fall in to a river and poltet that river and that river will probably lead to the sea and then the ocean will get plotted.
3: We should be make in rubbish thats disprove into ground because then when people drop they rubbish it will disprove into the ground and it have no effect on animals and sea animals and the Environment because it will be in the ground.
4:if we don’t do anything about it all of NZ will be plotted with rubbish.Then we will have know animals to eat because they will all have rubbish in they system .and we would not be able to go hunting because river would be plotted and deer and pigs would have to drink that water that's polluted
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